Don't Be a Camper, Page 2

Your genius continues to impress me! Kendra and Elliott continue to reveal all the charming facets of their personalities - and I'm continually being surprised! I can only hope that these characters become even more complex as your story progresses.

You display a much-improved spatial sense, especially in the third panel. I love the shot of the freeway! And which city is that on the horizon? I'm guessing it's San Francisco, because I think I see the Transamerica Building and the Oakland Bay Bridge.

What else? Well, I've always had a soft spot for the minimalist style of cartooning; actually, I think it looks very modern. You display your skill at making grass look clumpy and clouds look fluffy with only a modicum of detail. The result is simple yet beautiful artwork that people of all cultures can appreciate!

And almost everything else is top-notch: the pacing, the colors, the facial expressions. You could sell these - maybe even publish them!

I admit that the subject matter is still not to my taste, but the execution of it is masterful. And since I can be very much a form-over-content guy, I certainly appreciate good execution!

Please keep up the good work!